Wear a school uniform!

I buy a school uniform today! I put on a big size!!! Because I'm fat~^^;; I wear a school uniform and look at myself in the mirror! Oh! It looks great! I like it! It is an easy fit!! Also my mom takes a picture and she likes it, too!^^

Hello there! Good morning!

First, I would like to thank you for allotting some time to do your composition.

I went over it and just made some few corrections.

If you have time, I would appreciate if you will go over it.

 Have a great day ahead!

~T. Heidi^^

P.S.

We have to talk about this one in class.

I would really like to see you in your uniform right now!^^

I buy a school uniform today!

>>I bought a school uniform today.

I put on a big size!!!

>>I put on a big size.

>>I tried the big size.

Because I\'m fat~^^;;

>>Correct.

>>Because I am fat.^^
I wear a school uniform and look at myself in the mirror!
>>I wore my school uniform and looked at myself in the mirror.

Oh! It looks great! I like it!
>>Correct.

It is an easy fit!

>>Correct.
Also my mom takes a picture and she likes it, too!^^

>>Also, my mom took a picture of me and she likes it, too!^^