Weather
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*** What weather do you enjoy? Is it cloudy, sunny, rainy, etc? Why?^^ I like the most cloudy and become a sunny but not a windy day. because at 1pm is to hot if sunny and like sun set. but if had a windy that's was too cold.
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Hi my dear [이름] .^__^.
Happy Friday!!! Yes, happy Friday again. I think, I just greeted you happy Monday yesterday, kkkk.. Anyway, thank you for sending me two compositions. You are so diligent. It feels like you have been enjoying your class and it makes me so please because of that. I hope you won\'t ever give up Engish.
I\'ll see you later and I\'m excited to hear your plan this weekend. Have a wonderful evening for now. See ya~
Janette~
*** What weather do you enjoy? Is it cloudy, sunny, rainy, etc? Why?^^
I like the most cloudy and become a sunny but not a windy day. because at 1pm is to hot if sunny and like sun set. but if had a windy that\'s was too cold. >>I like cloudy the most because when it\'s sunny, the weather is so hot especially at 1 pm. And if I\'ll choose windy, it\'s too cold.
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