Weather doesn\'t affect hobbies
학생이 쓴 원문
Weather doesn\'t affect any of my hobbies.
Because I don\'t have a hobby outside.
It is just lie on the bed, watch YouTube videos and draw pictures.
Therefore, weather doesn\'t affect those hobbies.
However, I sometimes walk in the [이름].
So I can\'t do that if the weather isn\'t suitable when it rains, snows and winds.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! These corrections aim to improve the clarity, grammar, and flow of the original text. I hope it helps. Thank you!
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
>>> Weather doesn\'t affect any of my hobbies
Because I don\'t have a hobby outside.
Because I don\'t have a hobby outside.
>>> because they\'re all indoor activities.
It is just lie on the bed, watch YouTube videos and draw pictures.
It is just lie on the bed, watch YouTube videos and draw pictures.
>>> I enjoy lying on the bed, watching YouTube videos, and drawing pictures.
Therefore, weather doesn\'t affect those hobbies.
Therefore, weather doesn\'t affect those hobbies.
>>> So, the weather doesn\'t really play a role in those activities.
However, I sometimes walk in the [이름].
However, I sometimes walk in the [이름].
>>> However, I do sometimes walk in the [이름],
So I can\'t do that if the weather isn\'t suitable when it rains, snows and winds.
So I can\'t do that if the weather isn\'t suitable when it rains, snows and winds.
>>> and in that case, I can\'t do it if the weather isn\'t suitable, like when it\'s raining, snowing, or windy.
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