Web rumors.
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Hi [이름]!!
Thank you so much for dropping by. I totally agree that cyber space is getting more powerful nowadays. It is not wrong to express your opinion about something, other people just have to respect somebody else's ideas and perception. Keep it up okay. See you again tomorrow.
Lei J
Today, I read the article, "Chinese Web rumors ridicule rescue effort" for my class.
>>correct
There are many rumors not only this case.
>>There many rumors circulating nowadays, not only regarding this issue.
Sometimes it make people be sad and frustrated,
>>Sometimes it makes people sad and frustrated.
Web doesn't matter phiysical distance.
>>Physical distance doesn't matter in the web.
They're sharing their ideas and opinions.
>>correct
They need right view of the world and global attitude.
>>They need to to have the right view view and global attitude.
Cyber space is becoming more powerful.
>>correct
We need good maner, even we can not see.
>>We need to have good manner towards it, even if it is not visible.
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