Wed/4/14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I’d say people in my country are generally quite close to their families. In Korea, family ties are traditionally very strong, and many people place a high value on respecting and supporting their parents. For example, it’s common for families to get together during major holidays or important occasions.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름]shin! That’s a well-structured and thoughtful response. It clearly highlights the importance of family values in your country, and the example you provided effectively supports your point in a simple and natural way.
~T. Jenna
Yes, I’d say people in my country are generally quite close to their families.
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>>Yes, I\'d say that people in my country tend to have very close-knit family relationships.
In Korea, family ties are traditionally very strong, and many people place a high value on respecting and supporting their parents.
Correct, or
>>In Korea, family bonds are traditionally very strong, and there is a strong emphasis on respecting and supporting one’s parents.
For example, it’s common for families to get together during major holidays or important occasions.
Correct, or
>>As a result, it is quite common for families to come together and spend quality time during major holidays or other significant occasions.
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Yes, I’d say that people in my country tend to have very close-knit family relationships. In Korea, family bonds are traditionally very strong, and there is a strong emphasis on respecting and supporting one’s parents. As a result, it is quite common for families to come together and spend quality time during major holidays or other significant occasions.
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