wedding

I think wedding is so complex in my country. Wedding time is very short. So the ceremony progressed quite fast. Because next weddind is waiting. And most couple pay respects to parents immediately after the wedding ceremony So bride and groom can't say thank the guest. I heard most couple couldn't spend romantic wedding night. Because wedding is so tired to them. Wedding in korea needs to be simple.

Hello [이름]!

I feel bad that your wedding ceremonies in Korea are that way. I hope you could see weddings here in the Philippines, they are so romantic and there are a lot of Filipino traditions added to it that makes it a beautiful wedding.

 

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 I think wedding is so complex in my country.

>>In our country, I think weddings are so complex.
Wedding time is very short. So the ceremony progressed quite fast. Because next weddind is waiting.
>> The ceremonies are very short and fast because the next couple to get wed are waiting.
And most couple pay respects to parents immediately after the wedding ceremony So bride and groom can't say thank the guest.
>>The couples pay respect to their parents right after the wedding so the bride and groom have no tome to thank their guests.
I heard most couple couldn't spend romantic wedding night. Because wedding is so tired to them.
>>I heard that most couples couldn’t spend a romantic together at night because, the wedding makes them tired.
Wedding in korea needs to be simple.
>>Correct!

>>Weddings in Korea should be kept simple.