Wednesday, 1st of Februay
학생이 쓴 원문
These days I easily feel tired especially in the afternnon. That\'s why It was very difficult to focus on work for a long time. Everytime I get tired I try to eat or take something such as tangerines, sweets, vitamine and omega3 supplements. It is working sometimes, but I usually feel tired again later on. In my perspective excercise in a regular basis, is the best way to get rid of my tiredness. I ride a bike once a week, but I think I need more exercise after all.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir RICH. Working out is definitely beneficial. I know it\'s not fun and we tend to get lazy doing it after a long day at work, but it is necessary. Good luck!
These days I easily feel tired especially in the afternnon.
>>> These days, I easily feel tired especially in the afternoon.
That\'s why It was very difficult to focus on work for a long time.
>>> correct
Every time I get tired I try to eat or take something such as tangerines, sweets, vitamin and omega3 supplements.
>>> correct
It is working sometimes, but I usually feel tired again later on.
>>> correct
In my perspective, excercise in a regular basis, is the best way to get rid of my tiredness.
>>> In my perspective, exercising in a regular basis is the best way to get rid of my tiredness.
I ride a bike once a week, but I think I need more exercise after all.
>>> correct
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