wednesday
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~My teacher Tina~
How about today? Hope to be fine.
To me, it is good day.
cause, i meet the Co-worker working at branch in Pusan.
Our company's HQ is located in Pusan nearby Hae-un Dea Beach.
Do U know Hae-Un Dea Beach? That is one of the most popular vacation spot in korea.
Someday when you travel korea, I recommend it to you.
Of course, The Philippines have many beautiful Beach. I hope to visit
your country.^^;
Second, I've been knowing EEI company located the Philppines.
If with luck onmyside, we'll make a Biz with EEI.
In my point,
I own my luckness to you.
강사 첨삭
Hi! Good evening! Please study the corrections below. Go over them and try practicing again. Have a good night! ^^
>>Tina<<
Hello~My teacher Tina~
>>Hello! My teacher Tina!How about today?
>>How about you today? Hope to be fine.
>>Hope you are fine.To me, it is good day. cause, i meet the Co-worker working at branch in Pusan.
>>To me, it is a good day because I met my co-worker at our branch in Pusan.Our company's HQ is located in Pusan nearby Hae-un Dea Beach.>>CORRECT.Do U know Hae-Un Dea Beach?
>>Do you know Hae-Un Dea beach?
That is one of the most popular vacation spot in korea.
>> That is one of the most popular vacation spots in Korea.Someday when you travel korea, I recommend it to you.
>>Someday when you plan to visit Korea, I recommend that place for you to see.Of course, The Philippines have many beautiful Beach.
>>Needless to say, the Philippines have many beautiful beaches.
I hope to visit your country.^^;>>I hope to visit your country someday. ^^Second, I've been knowing EEI company located the Philppines.
>>Secondly, I knew EEI Company, which is located in the Philippines. If with luck onmyside, we'll make a Biz with EEI.>>If with luck on my side, we'll make a business with EEI.In my point,I own my luckness to you.
>>In my point, I owe my luck to you.
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