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I will travel someday. It is one of what I want to when I came in university. If I afford to travel, maybe it will be on winter vacation. But I can't imagain how much money will be needed. One of my friends have already been to Europe before entrance into an university. He said, he took a part time jop to earn for the cost of trip. I want to be like him. He is really great. You said in the class to see a video clip for a future tense. But I can't find where it is. Please give me a help again. :'( Take care :) <Essay> I think Italy is the most impressive country. Becaues there are still so many ruins. And the city view is also interesting. I could feel it when I saw Italy in TV. If I go to Europe, I will surely go there!

Hi there [이름]^^   Travelling is a challenge for learning. You\'d make a great experience in Europe and I think that you are very outgoing. If you are worried about the budget for the trip, consider backpacking. I think it\'s the cheapest way to travel in Europe but the most exciting. The best way of course is to travel with friends and have good memories.   Here is a video that might help you. I think that it is useful since you asked me before about \"will\' and \"going to\". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SmSKJ-t8lJ8   Italy is one very impressive country and I agree with you. Ruins are destroyed remains and it\'s very interesting how something damaged can be very beautiful. I hope you do travel to Europe someday.^^   Good luck and ask me questions if you are confused.^^   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   I will travel someday. >> CORRECT OR> I will go to places someday. It is one of what I want to when I came in university. >> It is one of the things that I want when I entered the University.  If I afford to travel, maybe it will be on winter vacation. >> If I can afford to travel, maybe it will be on a winter vacation.  But I can\'t imagain how much money will be needed. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m not so sure how much money I would need. One of my friends have already been to Europe before entrance into an university. >> One of my friends have already been to Europe before entering into a University. He said, he took a part time jop to earn for the cost of trip. I want to be like him. He is really great. >> He said, he took a part time job to earn for the cost of trip. I want to be like him. He is really great. You said in the class to see a video clip for a future tense. >> CORRECT OR> You mentioned in class to look for a video about future tenses. But I can\'t find where it is. Please give me a help again. :\'( >> CORRECT OR> I cannot find one. Please help me with this.Take care^^ I think Italy is the most impressive country. >> CORRECT OR> Italy impresses me the most.Becaues there are still so many ruins. >> CORRECT OR> There are still a lot of ruins.And the city view is also interesting. >> CORRECT Or> The view of the city is very interesting I could feel it when I saw Italy in TV. If I go to Europe, I will surely go there! >> CORRECT OR> I can feel how interesting it is just by watching it on TV. I will make it a point to go there.