Wednesday homework

2020-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Melody

학생이 쓴 원문

Claire\'s homework

강사 첨삭

1.We need to thanks to our ears, so we can hear something.>>We need to thank for our ears because we can hear.
2.Eyes make us see everything around us.>>CORRECTOR>>We can see everything around us because we have eyes. 3.The nose has two holes and it is in the middle of our face.>>CORRECTOR>>The nose has two holes and it is in the center of our face.
4.The helmet protect our head at dangereous moment.>>The helmet protects our head at dangerous moments.
5.We make our hair in the hair salon.>>We style our hair in the hair salon.
6.If we exercise too hard, our elbow will get hurt.>>CORRECTOR>>If we exercise too much, our elbow will get hurt.
7.We protect our foot with shoes.>>CORRECTOR>>We protect our feet by wearing shoes.
8.My father\'s palm is bigger than my palm.>>CORRECTOR>>My father ha bigger palms than me. 9.My grandma\'s waist is hurt.>>CORRECTOR>>My grandma\'s waist is in pain. 10.I massage my parent\'s shoulders.>>CORRECTOR>>I massage my parent\'s shoulders every time.
Very good, Claire.
- T. Melody ^^

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