Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.If I go to travel with my bestfriend, mabe that day will be my bestday.>>If I go to travel with my best friend, maybe that day will be my best day.
2.I bend my waist to see small insects on the ground.>>CORRECTOR>>I need to bend my waist to the ground to see small insects.
3.I think elephant is the most big animal in the zoo.>>I think elephant is the biggest animal in the zoo. 4.My father always put salsd in the salad bowl when there is some salad left after we eat.>>My father always put salad in the salad bowl when there is some salad left after we eat. 5.We must keep rules and didn\'t do bad things.>>We must keep rules and should not do bad things.
6.Vampire always eat blood for there meals.>>Vampires always have blood to their meals.
7.We need to take some break after the important and hard thing.>>We need to take some break after an important and hard thing. 8.I don\'t like bad time these days because I always dreaming about nightmare.>>I don\'t like bad times these days because I always have nightmares.
9.There is hey and some food for animals in the barn usually.>>There are usually hay and some food for animals in the barn.
10.There are many kind of ball forexample foot ball, basket ball, baseball, and velley ball.>>There are many kinds of balls for example, foot ball, basket ball, baseball, and volleyball.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
2.I bend my waist to see small insects on the ground.>>CORRECTOR>>I need to bend my waist to the ground to see small insects.
3.I think elephant is the most big animal in the zoo.>>I think elephant is the biggest animal in the zoo. 4.My father always put salsd in the salad bowl when there is some salad left after we eat.>>My father always put salad in the salad bowl when there is some salad left after we eat. 5.We must keep rules and didn\'t do bad things.>>We must keep rules and should not do bad things.
6.Vampire always eat blood for there meals.>>Vampires always have blood to their meals.
7.We need to take some break after the important and hard thing.>>We need to take some break after an important and hard thing. 8.I don\'t like bad time these days because I always dreaming about nightmare.>>I don\'t like bad times these days because I always have nightmares.
9.There is hey and some food for animals in the barn usually.>>There are usually hay and some food for animals in the barn.
10.There are many kind of ball forexample foot ball, basket ball, baseball, and velley ball.>>There are many kinds of balls for example, foot ball, basket ball, baseball, and volleyball.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
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