Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!I was very happy and touched to read your message! I was really happy to meet you too. You were very smart and you can answer my questions right away. Keep up the good work and I\'m looking forward to more classes with you! <3~~Teacher KateMy ideal pet is Kakapo. >>CORRECT!Because I saw the picture of the Kakapo in dictionary about animals,
and Kakapo is very cute and looks fluffy. >>It is because I saw the picture of the Kakapo in a dictionary about animals,and the Kakapo is very cute and looks fluffy. It is also colorful.>>CORRECT!Kakapo is kind of parrot, it also has yellow and green feathers.>>The Kakapo is a kind of parrot, it also has yellow and green feathers.Kakapo usually live in New Zealand but nowdays they are in danger.>>Kakapos usually live in New Zealand but nowadays, they are endangered. I hope they are keep living in the Earth.>>I hope they keep living on Earth.
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