Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Wow your birthday is really coming! I\'m excited to wish you a happy birthday! <3. Thank you for always making your homework. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
For last year I\'m look forward to my birthday.
>>I looked forward to my birthday last year.
But for now I\'m not look forward to my birthday.
>>But for now, I\'m not looking forward to my birthday.
Because now I am too busy to think about my birthday.
>>CORRECT!
If I do my works, the birthday will come someday.
>>If I do my work, my birthday will come someday.
I think like this. But I love birthday party.
>>I think like this but I love throwing a birthday party.
Everyone around me celerbrate me and I believe the wish come true when I blew out the candel on the birthday cake.
>>Everyone around me celebrates with me and I believe the wish will come true when I blow out the candle on the birthday cake.
Of course, I get my birthday present!
>>CORRECT!
When I untangle the bow on gift box, that moment is so happy and glad.
>>When I untie the bow on the gift box, that moment is so happy and it makes me glad.
I also like to read letters from my family and friends.
>>CORRECT!
I think my birthday is almost here.
>>CORRECT!
After 8month later.
>>It will be here after 8 months.
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