Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for your composition today. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
If I can go to the future and want to find out something, I think I will find out myself.
>>If I can go to the future and want to find out something, I think I will find out more about myself.
Because I want to know what job I have, where will I live and like stuff about myself.
>>I want to know what job I will have, where I will live and other stuff about myself.
Also about my family and something like that.
>>Also, I\'ll find out more about my family or something like that.
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