Wednesday homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Thank you for always making your homework. Reading your compositions are always so fun! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>I enjoy eating foods at night most, because the food tastes more yummy when eaten at night.
But if children eating at night usually, it is not good for health and also we can’t grow taller during the night because we need to digest foods and our body can only handle the one work at once.
>>But if children eat at night frequently, it is not good for their health and also we can’t grow taller during the night because we need to digest foods and our body can only handle one task at a time.
I only have one experience eating at night.
>>CORRECT!
I ate chicken at 10 o’clock.
>>CORRECT!
And that was more delicious than I ate at afternoon.
>>And that was more delicious than when I ate it in the afternoon.
So usually Koreans night food menu is chickens and Ramen.
>>So, usually, Koreans\' dinner menu consists of chicken and Ramen.
How about Philippines? Do they eat at night?
>>CORRECT!
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