Wednesday homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Thank you for submitting your homework today too! See you tomorrow! ^^
~~teacher Kate
I will choose the name of movie to ‘Rainbow rain’.
>>I will choose the title \"Rainbow Rain\" for the movie.
Now days it is rainy outside.
>>Nowadays, it has been rainy outside.
Sometimes weather is rainy but rainbow comes out at the same time.
>>Sometimes, even though it is raining, a rainbow comes out at the same time.
So the rain and rainbow mix together and the color of rain change it’s color to rainbow.
>>So the rain and rainbow occur at the same time so the color of the rain changes to a rainbow color.
For the meaning it is very hard to see rain and rainbow mix together.
>>It means that it is very hard to see the rain and the rainbow occur at the same time.
But it is really beautiful.
>>CORRECT!
It mean live a beautiful life just like the rainbow rain.
>>CORRECT!
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