Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thanks for all the compositions for today! They were so fun to read, see you tomorrow! <3
~~teacher Kate
I only watch television on weekends.
>>CORRECT!
It looks better but it is worst.
>>It looks nice but it is the worst.
If I starts to watch TV on weekend I didn’t move from the couch.
>>Once I start watching TV on the weekend, I won\'t move from the couch.
Only my hands go in to snack package and go in to my mouth and I repeat that all day long.
>>Only my hands go into a snack package and then it goes into my mouth and I repeat that all day long.
Sometimes I play computer games.
>>CORRECT!
I think I play more computer games than watching TV.
>>I think I play more computer games than watch TV.
When I play computer game too long my eyes get heart.
>>When I play computer games too long my eyes feel painful.
Than I watch TV.
>>Then, I watch TV.
But the chance that I can do all these is only weekend.
>>But my only chance to do all these is only on the weekends.
I’m not complain about I can only do these only on weekend.
>>I\'m not complaining that I can only do these on the weekends though.
Because if I play and have a rest too much I would not feel joy when I’m doing that.
>>Because if I play and take too much rest, then I would not feel any joy from doing that.
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