Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for making your homework for last week! You did a lot haha. Great job Claire. See you in class ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I think the internet is the best invention for me.
>>CORRECT!
I don’t know who invented the internet but someone that invent internet is the jenius I think.
>>I don’t know who invented the internet but whoever invented the internet is a genius I think.
Because when we have phone but if there is no internet we can’t call and have a class.
>>It\'s Because when we have phone but if there is no internet we can’t call and have a class.
Also it must be very hard to have a friend live far away from us.
>>Also, it must be very hard to have a friend live far away from us.
These days we get friend in the online too.
>>These days we get friends online too.
Like in the online game.
>>CORRECT!
Playing game alone is boring and I talk to someone who play the game too.
>>Playing a game alone is boring so I talk to someone who plays the game too.
And we make new friends.
>>CORRECT!
It’s so nice to play together and share the ideas.
>>CORRECT!
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