Wednesday Homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Thanks for making your Wednesday homework. ^^ Keep it up.
~~teacher Kate
I think something like robot codes and simple numbers will be the common things in the future.
>>CORRECT!
Usually many confusing things that has long name exist in the world will called in simple names.
>>For example, many confusing things that have long name exist in the world will be called using simple names.
Example of a short name that will used in the future is number, alphabet, and number plus alphabet.
>>For example, a shortened name that will used in the future is number, alphabet. They will combine number and alphabet and make it shorter.
Reason that I think like this is we use number and alphabet for now too but usually in the back of a product.
>>The reason why I think like this is because we use numbers and alphabets for now too but usually in the back of a product.
The good things about change things name into simple cords is we can remember easier and remember correctly.
>>The good thing about changing the names into simple ones is that we can remember it more easily and accurately.
And the bad things about change things name into simple cord is we can’t feel any feelings from the products.
>>And the bad things about changing the names of things into simpler ones is that we can’t feel anything from the products.
But I hope people will use there traditional languages as it was.
>>CORRECT!
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