Wednesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
hello Claire!
Thanks for your composition today. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
If I had the power to solve one major problem, I want to solve ecocide problem.
>>If I had the power to solve one major problem, I want to solve the problem on ecocide.
So I can reduce the number of dying animals and the animals that need help very much.
>>With that, I can reduce the number of dying animals and help the animals that need help.
Then polar bears and other animals will live happily in the world just like in the past.
>>CORRECT!
Also the global warming will get better by doing this.
>>CORRECT!
I hope this will happened in real life and animals are stay in their place peacefully.
>>I hope this will happen in real life and animals can stay in their habitats peacefully.
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