Wednesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Once more I\'m amazed by your sentences! Wow. Your writing skills keep improving. Good Job! ^^ See you in class tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
Not only the Coronavirus spread but also cold and flu are common during winter time.
>>Not only has the Coronavirus spread but also cold and flu are common during winter time.
So, we can confuse cold and Coronavirus or confuse flu and Coronavirus.
>>CORRECT!
In winter the water in the toilet is cold.
>>CORRECT!
People will feel cold and try not to wash their hands often.
>>CORRECT!
It really happened to me last winter.
>>CORRECT!
The weather was cold, and I didn’t want to wash my hands with cold water.
>>CORRECT!
Many children didn’t like to wash their hands before this pandemic happen too.
>>Many children didn’t like to wash their hands before this pandemic happened too.
If water is cold, children won’t like to wash their hands more.
>>If the water is cold, children won’t like to wash their hands more often.
I think the answer is to wash our hands often and don’t go to the place that many people are staying.
>>I think the answer is to wash our hands often and don’t go to the places where many people are staying.
There is no better way to protect ourselves from disease before vaccines come out.
>>CORRECT!
Winter can be changed by our actions.
>>CORRECT!
So we need to protect ourselves from the disease.
>>CORRECT!
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