Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:If you could join a club in your school, what would it be?
A:It will be computer club.
First, I like do something in computer.
Second, I like learn something about computer.
Last, there are no club that I like except computer club.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! You did well today!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
It will be computer club.
>>It will be the computer club.
OR>>I would join the computer club.
First, I like do something in computer.
>>First, I like doing something using the computer.
OR>>First, I like doing something on the computer.
Second, I like learn something about computer.
>>Second, I like learning something about computers.
Last, there are no club that I like except computer club.
>>Last, there is no club that I like except the computer club.
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