Wednesday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:Which do you prefer to have, inner beauty or outer beauty?
A:I prefer to have inner beauty.
First,I like a kind person then a handsome person.
Second, if a person is kind, he or she would do good to me.
Last, the inner beauty will be kind and, have many patience.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! You did great with your homework today!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
First,I like a kind person then a handsome person.
>>First, I like a kind person more than a handsome person.
Second, if a person is kind, he or she would do good to me.
>>CORRECT
Last, the inner beauty will be kind and, have many patience.
>>Last, the inner beauty person will be kind and have a lot of patience.
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