Wednesday homework
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Q:What do you like about schools?
A:I like my school has many projects and my school is big too.
First, there would be a project that I like so I can choose one of my school projects.
Second, I like my school is big because if school is big then there will be many classes so I can meet many different students.
Third, but there is a problem that I can\'t remember where is my class easy.
Last, and I don\'t like there is no biology project in my school.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Great job with your homework today!
~Teacher Sheila
>>I like that my school has many projects and my school is big too.
First, there would be a project that I like so I can choose one of my school projects.
>>CORRECT
Second, I like my school is big because if school is big then there will be many classes so I can meet many different students.
>>Second, I like that my school is big because if a school is big then there will be many classes so I can meet many different students.
Third, but there is a problem that I can\'t remember where is my class easy.
>>Third, the only problem is that I couldn\'t remember easily where my class is.
Last, and I don\'t like there is no biology project in my school.
>>Last, I don\'t like that there is no biology project in my school.
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