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Q:What do you think is the weirdest animal?
A:I think animal that has a weirdest look is blob fish and animal that has a weirdest feature is basilisk lizard.
First, I think blob fish is very ugly and it looks like very weird so I think the animal that has a weirdest look is blob fish.
Second, basilisk lizard can walk on the water and I thought it is impossible so I think animal that has a weirdest feature is basilisk lizard.
Last, water strider can walk on the water to but, the difference is water strider has oil at its feet but basilisk lizard isn\'t.
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I think animal that has a weirdest look is blob fish and animal that has a weirdest feature is basilisk lizard.
>>I think the animal that has the weirdest look is the blobfish and the animal that has the weirdest feature is the basilisk lizard.
First, I think blob fish is very ugly and it looks like very weird so I think the animal that has a weirdest look is blob fish.
>>CORRECT
Second, basilisk lizard can walk on the water and I thought it is impossible so I think animal that has a weirdest feature is basilisk lizard.
>>Second, basilisk lizards can walk on water and I thought it is impossible so I think the animal that has the weirdest feature is the basilisk lizard.
Last, water strider can walk on the water to but, the difference is water strider has oil at its feet but basilisk lizard isn\'t.
>>Last, the water strider can walk on water too but the difference is that water strider has oil at its feet but basilisk lizard doesn\'t have.
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