Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:Do you like going to the park?
A:I like going to park.
First, there are many animals so I can look at them in the park.
Second, I can breath the fresh air in the park so I like going to the park.
Last, there are many thing to see or play o I like going to there.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Great job!
~Teacher Sheila
I like going to park.
>>I like going to parks.
OR>>I like going to the park.
First, there are many animals so I can look at them in the park.
>>CORRECT
Second, I can breath the fresh air in the park so I like going to the park.
>>Second, I can breathe fresh air in the park so I like going to the park.
Last, there are many thing to see or play o I like going to there.
>>Last, there are many things to see or play so I like going there.
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