Wednesday homework

2021-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What do you like about your brother? A:I don\'t like my brother that much. First, we fight almost everyday when we are talking. Second, he always insist his opinion so I can\'t talk normally with my brother. Last, he almost always say something that is not connected with subject so we can\'t talk normally.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Excellent job! I like that you were honest with your answers. 

~Teacher Sheila

I don\'t like my brother that much.
>>CORRECT

First, we fight almost everyday when we are talking.
>>First, we fight almost every day when we are talking.

Second, he always insist his opinion so I can\'t talk normally with my brother.
>>Second, he always insists his opinions so I can\'t talk normally with my brother.

Last, he almost always say something that is not connected with subject so we can\'t talk normally.
>>Last, he almost always says something that is not connected with the subject that we are talking about so we can\'t talk normally.

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