Wednesday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What other mythical creature do you have in Korean literature?
A:There are four mythical creature in korea.
First, there are red bird, blue dragon, black tortoise and, white tiger.
Red bird is a bird that has red feather.
Blue dragon is a dragon that is blue color.
Black tortoise is a tortoise that has a long nack and black shell.
Last, white tiger is a tiger that has white far.
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Q: What other mythical creature do you have in Korean literature?
A: There are four mythical creature in korea.
>>> There are four mythical creatures in South Korea.
First, there are red bird, blue dragon, black tortoise and, white tiger.
>>> First, there is the red bird, the blue dragon, the black tortoise and, the white tiger.
Red bird is a bird that has red feather.
>>> The red bird is a bird having a red feather.
Blue dragon is a dragon that is blue color.
>>> The blue dragon is a dragon in blue color.
Black tortoise is a tortoise that has a long nack and black shell.
>>> The black tortoise is a tortoise that has a long neck and black shell.
Last, white tiger is a tiger that has white far.
>>> Lastly, the white tiger is a tiger with white fur.
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