Wednesday homework
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Q:What school policy do you hate as a student?
A:I don\'t hate any policy of school.
First, school policy is made because students must not do it and I don\'t do anything that is include in the school policy.
Second, I am not that vital in school so I don\'t do many things in school so I don\'t break the school policy.
Last, I don\'t do anything that will damage someone so I can\'t break the school policy.
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Q: What school policy do you hate as a student?
A: I don\'t hate any policy of school.
>>> I don\'t hate any policy in school.
First, school policy is made because students must not do it and I don\'t do anything that is include in the school policy.
>>> First, a school policy is made for students to follow and I don\'t do the policies included in it because I know it\'s bad.
Second, I am not that vital in school so I don\'t do many things in school so I don\'t break the school policy.
>>> CORRECT
OR: Second, I am not that vital in school so I don\'t do a lot of things so I don\'t break school policies.
Last, I don\'t do anything that will damage someone so I can\'t break the school policy.
>>> CORRECT
OR: Last, I don\'t do anything that will damage someone else so I can\'t break the school policies.
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