Wednesday homework
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Q:What are some cuddly animals that you know?
A:There are puppy, kitten, and lesser panda.
First, they are cute because their sound is cute.
Second, they have a lot of smooth far so they feel good when we touch.
Last, they seem cute to me so I think they are cuddly.
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Q: What are some cuddly animals that you know?
A: There are puppy, kitten, and lesser panda.
>>> Some of the cuddly animals that I know are puppies, kittens, and pandas.
First, they are cute because their sound is cute.
>>> First, they are cute and cuddly because their sounds are cute.
Second, they have a lot of smooth far so they feel good when we touch.
>>> Second, they have smooth fur so it feels good when we touch them.
Last, they seem cute to me so I think they are cuddly.
>>> Lastly, they seem cute to me so I think they are cuddly.
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