Wednesday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

One of the pros of keeping a pet is I feel good when I look at my pet.

>> One of the pros of keeping a pet is that I feel good when I look at my pet.
And another is if the pet is a animal that can do activities with me, then I can play with my pet.

>> Another is if the pet is an animal that can do activities with me, then I can play with my pet.
First con of keeping pet is I have to do many things about my pets, so I cannot do something I want.

>> A con of keeping a pet is I have to do many things for my pet, so I cannot do something I want.
Second con of keeping pet is if my pet dies, then I feel very sad and I feel sorry to my pet.

>> Another con of keeping a pet is if my pet dies, then I will feel very sad and I will feel sorry for my pet.