Wednesday homework

2021-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What country would be fun to work in? A:If I have to work in one country, then I would work in Korea. I think almost of country will be fun to work, so I think I would work in many countries, if I can. But, if I have to work in one country then it will be Korea because a language I\'m very good at is only Korea language, so I\'ll work here. Also, if my friends and my families stay in Korea, and I work in other country, then I\'ll miss them but if I want to come back, then I need to pay for airport, and I need to leave my work temporary, so I\'ll work in Korea, if I have to work in only one country.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


If I have to work in one country, then I would work in Korea.

>> CORRECT!
I think almost of country will be fun to work, so I think I would work in many countries, if I can.

>> I think most countries would be fun to work in so if I can, I think I would work in other countries.
But, if I have to work in one country then it will be Korea because a language I\'m very good at is only Korea language, so I\'ll work here.

>> But if I have to work in one country, then it will be Korea because the language that I\'m very good at is only Korean, so I\'ll work here.
Also, if my friends and my families stay in Korea, and I work in other country, then I\'ll miss them 

>> Also, if my friends and families stay in Korea and I will work in another country, then I\'ll miss them.

but if I want to come back, then I need to pay for airport, and I need to leave my work temporary, 

>> But when I want to come back, then I\'ll need to pay for a plane ticket and I would need to temporarily leave my work.

so I\'ll work in Korea, if I have to work in only one country.

>> So that\'s why if I have to work in one country, I\'ll work here in Korea.


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