Wednesday homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I will chase him for a few time and if I can\'t catch him, then I will call to 911.
>> I will chase him and if I can\'t catch him, then I will call 911.
First, if I chase him for a few time he would have to rest for a few time, so I can make him waste his breath.
>> If I chase him for a long time, he would have to rest for some time, then I can make him waste his breath.
Second, if I chase him, and if I am faster than him, then I can catch him so I will say him, \"give me my purse back\".
>> Also, If I am faster than him, then I can catch him so I will tell him, \"Give me my purse back\".
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