Wednesday homework

2021-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What do you do if someone grabs your purse or backpack? A:I will chase him for a few time and if I can\'t catch him, then I will call to 911. First, if I chase him for a few time he would have to rest for a few time, so I can make him waste his breath. Second, if I chase him, and if I am faster than him, then I can catch him so I will say him, \"give me my purse back\".

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I will chase him for a few time and if I can\'t catch him, then I will call to 911.

>> I will chase him and if I can\'t catch him, then I will call 911.
First, if I chase him for a few time he would have to rest for a few time, so I can make him waste his breath.

>> If I chase him for a long time, he would have to rest for some time, then I can make him waste his breath.
Second, if I chase him, and if I am faster than him, then I can catch him so I will say him, \"give me my purse back\".

>> Also, If I am faster than him, then I can catch him so I will tell him, \"Give me my purse back\".

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