Wednesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I don\'t know what is the best amusement perk, but if I need to recommend an amusement park, then I will recommend Ever land.

>> I don\'t know what is the best amusement park, but if I need to recommend an amusement park, then I will recommend Ever land.
Because, Ever Land was the best amusement park that I ever been, and there are a lot of amusements.

>> Ever Land was the best amusement park that I have ever been to and there are a lot of amusements there.
Also, there is a zoo and there is some souvenir stores and food stores, so I could enjoy Ever Land more.

>> Also, there is a zoo and some souvenir stores and food stores, so I enjoyed Ever Land more.