Wednesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think I can be happy even if I\'m poor.

>> CORRECT!
Because, if I\'m poor, then I\'ll don\'t know how do other people live, 

>> If I\'m poor, then I won\'t know how other people live.

so if I do something new or eat something delicious, then I think I\'ll be happy even if I\'m poor.

>> So if I do something new or eat something delicious, then I think I\'ll be happy even if I\'m poor.
Also, if I can, I can get a job that I want to then, I can earn some money, and I can do something that I want to, then I\'ll be happy.

>> Also, if I can get a job that I want to, then I can earn some money and I can do something that I want, then I\'ll be happy.