Wednesday Homework

2021-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Do you have garage sales in your country? A:I\'m not sure about it, but I think our country doesn\'t have garage sales Actually, I\'ve never seen someone is doing garage sale, and even if there are someone doing garage sale, I think it\'s rare. But I think it\'s a good way to sale something, because people can see the appliances so I can lure people more easier.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I\'m not sure about it, but I think our country doesn\'t have garage sales

>> CORRECT!
Actually, I\'ve never seen someone is doing garage sale, and even if there are someone doing garage sale, I think it\'s rare.

>> Actually, I\'ve never seen someone doing a garage sale and even if there is someone doing it, I think it\'s rare.
But I think it\'s a good way to sale something, because people can see the appliances so I can lure people more easier.

>> But I think it\'s a good way to sell something because people can see some appliances so it can lure people easier.

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