Wednesday Homework

2021-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What do you prefer when you\'re studying, a small room, an open space, or studying outside? A:I like studying at an open space. I can talk with my family easier if I\'m studying at an open space. I also can see outside if I\'m studying at an open space, so I like studying at an open space

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I like studying at an open space.
>> I like studying in an open space.
I can talk with my family easier if I\'m studying at an open space.
>> I can talk with my family easier if I\'m studying in an open space.
I also can see outside if I\'m studying at an open space, so I like studying at an open space
>> I also can see the view outside if I\'m studying in an open space, so I like studying there.

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