Wednesday Homework

2021-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What is the main religion in your country? A:I think the main religion in my country is catholic. It\'s because when it was 1800~1900 many foreign culture came into our country, so at that moment, catholic came into our country. Before 1800, Buddhism was the main religion in our country.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think the main religion in my country is catholic.

>> I think the main religion in my country is Catholicism.
It\'s because when it was 1800~1900 many foreign culture came into our country, so at that moment, catholic came into our country.

>> It\'s because when it was 1800~1900, many foreign cultures came to our country so at that moment, Catholics also came to our country.
Before 1800, Buddhism was the main religion in our country.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> Before the 1800\'s, Buddhism was the main religion in our country.

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