Wednesday homework

2021-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Can you tell me about the most important lesson you\'ve learned in life so far? A:When people born, most of people are blank. It\'s from a sage person in China and he said that because when people born, they don\'t know anything. I was impressed of that lesson because if I teach someone nicely, then that person will be a good person, but if I teach someone badly, then that person will be a bad person.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


When people born, most of people are blank.

>> When people are them, most of them are blank.
It\'s from a sage person in China and he said that because when people born, they don\'t know anything.

>> It\'s from a sage from China and he said that when people are born, they don\'t know anything.
I was impressed of that lesson because if I teach someone nicely, then that person will be a good person, but if I teach someone badly, then that person will be a bad person.

>> I was impressed with that lesson because if I teach someone nicely then that person will be a good person, but if I teach someone badly then that person will be a bad person.

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