Wednesday Homework

2021-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:How long have you lived in your apartment? What do you like most about living there? A:I\'v lived here for 5 years almost 6 years. And I like that my apartment has suitable size. And my house is on the forth floor, so I can come back to my house by using stairs instead of elevator.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I\'v lived here for 5 years almost 6 years.
>> I\'ve lived here for 5 years, almost 6 years now.
And I like that my apartment has suitable size.
>> I like that my apartment has a suitable size for us.
And my house is on the forth floor, so I can come back to my house by using stairs instead of elevator.
>> My house is on the fourth floor, so I can come home to my house by using the stairs instead of the elevator.

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