Wednesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The best memory I had of me and my family doing something together was I went to amusement park with my family.

>> The best memory I had of me and my family doing something together was when we went to the amusement park.
It\'s because I went there and I\'ve ridden roller coaster there, and it was the first time that I rode roller coaster in my life.

>> It\'s because I went there and I\'ve ridden the roller coaster and it was the first time that I rode one in my life.
Also, I ate many delicious things in there, and it was very impressive too.

>> Also, I ate a lot of delicious food there and it was very impressive too.