Wednesday Homework

2022-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What are some positive ways people deal with stress? A:I don\'t know any positive ways people deal with stress, but I deal with stress by listening to musics or walking our town. I usually listen to peaceful classical musics, because if I listen to those musics, my mind get peaceful too. Also, when I walk our town, I think about what am I stressed about and I think it in a positive way.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I don\'t know any positive ways people deal with stress, but I deal with stress by listening to musics or walking our town.

>> I don\'t know any positive ways people deal with stress, but I deal with stress by listening to music or walking around our town.
I usually listen to peaceful classical musics, because if I listen to those musics, my mind get peaceful too.

>> I usually listen to peaceful classical music because if I listen to those kinds of music, my mind gets peaceful too.
Also, when I walk our town, I think about what am I stressed about and I think it in a positive way.

>> Also, when I walk around our town, I think about what I am stressed about and I think about it in a positive way.

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