Wednesday homework

2022-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:How does body language help you to communicate? A:Body language help me to communicate by showing other people what I want to say by doing some gesture. If I do some gesture then people can see then they can guess what I want to say to them. I think sign language is the best body language to mutes.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Body language help me to communicate by showing other people what I want to say by doing some gesture.

>> Body language helps me communicate by showing other people what I want to say by doing some gestures.
If I do some gesture then people can see then they can guess what I want to say to them.

>> If I do some gestures, then people can see it and they can guess what I want to say to them.
I think sign language is the best body language to mutes.

>> I think sign language is the best body language for mutes.

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