Wednesday homework

2022-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Can goals help to change your life? How? A:I think goals can help. If a persons\' goal is helping other people, then many people will think he or she is kind. Also, If my goal is to draw a picture everyday, then it can make me better at drawing. (During the satisfaction evaluation, I clicked done for a mistake before checking everything.)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I think goals can help.
>> CORRECT!
If a persons\' goal is helping other people, then many people will think he or she is kind.
>> If a person\'s goal is helping other people, then many people will think he or she is kind.
Also, If my goal is to draw a picture everyday, then it can make me better at drawing.
>> Also, if my goal is to draw a picture everyday, then it can make me better at drawing.

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