Wednesday Homework

2022-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Why do people say laughter is the best medicine? A:I think it\'s because, laughing give people a lot of good effects. Laughing can make people live longer, and laughing can make a person feel better. Also, laughing means that the person has a good emotion now, so other people can feel better too.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think it\'s because, laughing give people a lot of good effects.

>> I think it\'s because laughing has a lot of good effects on people.
Laughing can make people live longer, and laughing can make a person feel better.

>> CORRECT!
Also, laughing means that the person has a good emotion now, so other people can feel better too.

>> Another thing is laughing means that the person is in a good mood now, so people around him will feel better too.

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