Wednesday Homework

2022-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What celebrations/festivals/events do you enjoy the most? Why? A:I don\'t like going to celebrations. I don\'t like a place where there are a lot of people and a place it\'s noisy. Also, I like being alone because it\'s better to concentrate on something if I\'m alone.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I don\'t like going to celebrations.

>> CORRECT!
I don\'t like a place where there are a lot of people and a place it\'s noisy.

>> I don\'t like a place where there are a lot of people and a place that is noisy.
Also, I like being alone because it\'s better to concentrate on something if I\'m alone.

>> Also, I like being alone because I can concentrate better on something if I\'m alone.

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