Wednesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I like that our country have systematic education system,

>> I like that our country has a systematic education system.
If the education system is good, then students can learn many things efficiently, and can learn more things.

>> If the education system is good, then students can learn many things efficiently and they can learn more things.
Also, systematic education system make student\'s imagination more creative.

>> Also, a systematic education system makes a student\'s imagination more creative.