Wednesday Homework

2022-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:What is your father’s quality that you admire the most? A:The quality that I admire the most is that my father always tries to help me. When I\'m so tired or if I\'m not able to solve a problem, then my father always tries to help me. Also, my dad always leads me to the right way when I\'m going to the wrong way.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


The quality that I admire the most is that my father always tries to help me.

>> The quality that I admire the most in my father is that he always tries to help me.
When I\'m so tired or if I\'m not able to solve a problem, then my father always tries to help me.

>> When I feel so tired or if I\'m not able to solve a problem, then my father always tries to help me.
Also, my dad always leads me to the right way when I\'m going to the wrong way.

>>  Also, my dad always leads me to the right path when I\'m going to the wrong way.

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