Wednesday Homework

2022-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What are your hobbies and how long have you had your hobby? A:My hobbies are listening to music, and solving math puzzles. I like to listen to instrumental music or ballad songs. And I usually play minesweeper when I don\'t have anything to do, or when I\'m bored. I think I\'ve listened to music when I was in third grade of elementary school and I\'m playing minesweeper recently.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


My hobbies are listening to music, and solving math puzzles.

>> My hobbies are listening to music and solving math puzzles.
I like to listen to instrumental music or ballad songs.

>> CORRECT!
And I usually play minesweeper when I don\'t have anything to do, or when I\'m bored.

>> I usually play minesweeper when I don\'t have anything to do, or when I\'m bored.
I think I\'ve listened to music when I was in third grade of elementary school and I\'m playing minesweeper recently.

>> I think I\'ve been listening to music since I was in third grade of elementary school and I\'ve started playing minesweeper recently.

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