Wednesday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The most positive change that I\'ve experienced is I don\'t get shy even if I meet someone I don\'t know.

>> The most positive change that I\'ve experienced is I don\'t feel shy even if I meet someone I don\'t know.
Before, when I was young, I got shied when I meet someone not friendly, but now I don\'t.

>> Before, when I was young, I get shy when I meet someone who is not friendly, but now I don\'t anymore.
I think it\'s important to not be shied in front of someone, because if I don\'t get shied easily, I can look more friendly.

>> I think it\'s important to not feel shy in front of someone, because if I don\'t get shy easily, I can look more friendly.